Response Damiyr's Calisthenic.
This is an interesting approach to modularity. I am happy that you employed this technique after the class discussion. The words reach out the screen creating a visceral reaction that "prick[s]" and alerts me. In a way each word and syllable alerts its predecessor and successor, igniting the entire piece like magnolias in spring. I would recommend trying to stay away from words like murder, because they are already visceral. Doing this will force you to create the modular intensity yourself.
Below is my riff off your modulart.
murmurmurmur
inbetweenteensheat
proudBLACKteensproud
prickwhiteroticurlgirlfast
murmurmurmur
breakoutfastfastbreakout
quartertwomidnightdaybreakfast
rumurumurumr
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