Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Classmate Response 1, Week 7

Response to David's Junk.

I was struck by the language in your post. I think tornadoes tap dancing is a great reflection of their speed and whimsicality, their disregard for humanity. I tried using that language a little below.

When I hear another
tornado tap dancing our way,
I wonder whether I should write
or blow up a levee.
I convinced myself of the former,
so when she came
she took the dam thing away.

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