Classmate Response 2, Week 10

Response to Drika's Free Entry.

This revision of the earlier piece (that I commented on, I believe) is a great improvement. The provision of specific descriptors of the image of the mother figure is interesting. The allusion to the abject status of the mother with details such as "wrist chafe" and "chains of those before her" add a level of depth that should be explored further. For a future revision I would suggest that more descriptors be added. Finally, I would recommend drawing parallels between the image of the and the child, if that is where the thrust of the piece lies.